Thursday, November 20, 2014

Feedback for Tony and Danny: Jackie Robinson

For your comments on Presentations:

Write about something well done.  What did you learn from this group?  What part of the Presentation seemed the best?

Is there constructive criticism that would help this group?  What might have been more clear?  What part of the Presentation seemed the least polished?

Post comments for this group below this post, please, as we all need feedback, and it's valuable.

11 comments:

  1. 1.)One thing I think you both did very well was you made it very clear on why he was iconic instead of just talking about him and listing facts.
    2.)One suggestion i would have would be talk more about what he experienced as far as racism in the baseball rather than just showing a video.

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  2. The presentation wasverywell done, I liked the video you guys showed. One critique would be to maybe have given more examples of hate he got

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  3. One thing I think you both did very well was that your presentation was very well prepared and it sounded like you guys had worked hard on it.
    One thing you could work on is that you both stumbled a few times and your voice level went down so not sounding so nervous.

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  4. You guys did very well explaining that he was the first athlete to break the color barrier, which I did not know. One thing I would critique is maybe not speaking as monotone?

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  5. You guys did a very good job comparing him to a current day comparison. You also had good use of images, only thing bad was maybe give more examples of what he went through.

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  6. During this presentation, I learned that Jackie was drafted into the army right after college and the reason for this was because he said that he wanted to fight for equality. I found it interesting that he played for the dodgers for 10 years. Something that I thought you could have done better is to maybe focus on one specific topic/story and talk about it.

    Overall, this was a very good and well thought out process;

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  7. I think you guys did a great job presenting. You knew your facts really well and I liked all the photos and videos that were apart of your presentation. One thing you could've done better was pinpoint one quality about him or an event that made him so iconic.

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  8. I thought you guys really knew your information, and I learned a lot about Jackie after watching this presentation. If I had to pick something out to change, it would be talking about an experience that he had personally about the struggles he faced on his journey.

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  9. I think you guys did a great job in being able to show us just what Jackie Robinson had to go through and the emotions he had to handle to become the first African-American baseball player. One thing you guys could've used more of is on what exactly made him iconic and more examples or his great achievements.

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  10. You guys did a really good job at bringing what it was like for Robinson everyday and everything he went through. We all know him for the great baseball player he was but after seeing all the diversity he went through and brought about change really shows how iconic he was. Maybe give more examples of what he went through.

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  11. I really enjoyed your presentation about Jackie Robinson, he is my dads favorite baseball player! I really liked the video you showed of him as well because it captured how he has anger issues but tries to control them in front of a crowd. You guys did a good job of not reading off of your slides and the only thing i would say is that the presentation was a little monotone when you spoke but everything else was great!

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