Thursday, November 20, 2014

Feedback for Jenn and Emelia: Marilyn Monroe

For your comments on Presentations:

Write about something well done.  What did you learn from this group?  What part of the Presentation seemed the best?

Is there constructive criticism that would help this group?  What might have been more clear?  What part of the Presentation seemed the least polished?

Post comments for this group below this post, please, as we all need feedback, and it's valuable.





11 comments:

  1. I really like how you started your presentation off with a song. The song immediately grabbed ahold of my attention, keeping me interested to see what else you had to present. I would suggest to use less facts of background information about Marilyn Monroe, that a way you have more time to focus on and talk about what major things make her so iconic.

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  2. I thought that it was really cool to learn that she changed her name. Also I really didn't know how much Marilyn had to overcome from a young age. My only criticism is that I think it was good that you showed a video, but to me it after it you lost focus for a little.

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  3. One thing you did very well was your presentation seemed well put together from the power point to the flow and the quality of detail. A suggestion i would have would be to talk about more why she was iconic and what impact she made.

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  4. You guys definitely gave a lot of information that i think was unknown to a lotof people.One thing is that you guys almost had too much info and it got kind of confusing because you kind bounced back and forth

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  5. One thing you both did very well was the effort and hard work you put into the slides, you both also mastered the material very well. One thing you could work on if anything would to make the transitions in the intro spot on cause it was really cool

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  6. You described what her ice was like before being famous really well. I didn't know that she was in the foster care system and that she did all that she could to get out of it, like marrying someone at the age of 16. One thing I would critique is not to use as many examples next time and make it shorter.

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  7. I found it interesting that she "set an image" for future generations. Something I really liked was your intro. Your presentation was really good so I guess the only thing bad was it was a little long.

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  8. During this presentation I really liked how you started out your slide show, by stating that Marilyn "The Cinderella who never got her happily ever after". This kind of played a roll into everything throughout the entire slideshow. I found it interesting that her husband divorced her specifically because she was a model.
    Something I feel that could of been improved was to maybe add a video in this about a specific event that happened with Marilyn.

    Overall, this was a very well thought out presentation!

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  9. You guys did a really good job, and you seemed like you both knew what you were talking about. I learned that she was lonely, even though the public media didn't make her seem that way. If I had to pick something out to change, it would have been to maybe add a video or something for us to watch to get to know her a little more.

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  10. Great job on the creation of your visual PowerPoint and the intro you guys had. You guys seemed like experts on the subject and was able to teach us all a lot more about Marilyn Monroe. One criticism about the presentation was that the presentation seemed really wordy.

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  11. You guys both did a really good job! I didn't really know too much about Monroe and it was interesting to see other sides of her that were not known as much to the public. Only thing I would change is the beginning was kind of choppy buy going to YouTube to play that song

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